Erotic Poem #1

[Tiffany Paris]

I wrote this poem a long time ago so many of you might have read it already. It was inspired by a dream I had once.


Cold metal next to her warm flesh
Just to watch her little finger...
on the trigger.
Ready to blow
She has the power now
She's the one in control...
I am told not to move.
Not to say a word
"Get down on your hands and knees!" she says.
I obey.
"Keep your hands in the air where I can see them" she says.
I obey.
She takes everything I have
Then...
She exits.
"count to ten" she turns to say.
"Tell anyone about this...and I'll be back!"
She leaves
I can feel her presence is gone...
And I want to run and tell the whole world.

[theflash]

I wrote this poem a long time ago so many of you might have read it already. It was inspired by a dream I had once.


Cold metal next to her warm flesh
Just to watch her little finger...
on the trigger.
Ready to blow
She has the power now
She's the one in control...
I am told not to move.
Not to say a word
"Get down on your hands and knees!" she says.
I obey.
"Keep your hands in the air where I can see them" she says.
I obey.
She takes everything I have
Then...
She exits.
"count to ten" she turns to say.
"Tell anyone about this...and I'll be back!"
She leaves
I can feel her presence is gone...
And I want to run and tell the whole world.

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[Randy]

I wrote this poem a long time ago so many of you might have read it already. It was inspired by a dream I had once.


Cold metal next to her warm flesh
Just to watch her little finger...
on the trigger.
Ready to blow
She has the power now
She's the one in control...
I am told not to move.
Not to say a word
"Get down on your hands and knees!" she says.
I obey.
"Keep your hands in the air where I can see them" she says.
I obey.
She takes everything I have
Then...
She exits.
"count to ten" she turns to say.
"Tell anyone about this...and I'll be back!"
She leaves
I can feel her presence is gone...
And I want to run and tell the whole world.

Kind of on the dark side. I like the style. The commands. The answers. The ending is curious and revealing.

[A.J. Angel]

Very nice written poem Tiffany! I like it! It's cool because I also happen to write poetry from time to time though I must have not written one for a few months by now.

[Tiffany Paris]

Kind of on the dark side. I like the style. The commands. The answers. The ending is curious and revealing.

Yes, it is a little dark. In fact, unless it's sexual I usually dream about dark stuff. I have also had nightmares off and on since I was a child. Weird, since I'm such a bright happy person. :(

I need someone to protect me at night while I sleep ;)

My two pitbulls do that pretty well though!

[Tiffany Paris]

Very nice written poem Tiffany! I like it! It's cool because I also happen to write poetry from time to time though I must have not written one for a few months by now.


Thank you, you should email me some of your poetry sometime. Actually, feel free to post it here on the board :cool:

[theflash]

i can protect you if you need someone